Wikiup Diskussion:Personal Acquaintances
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Hello I am NoPolyMath (Diskussion) 22:28, 11. Aug. 2014 (CEST)
I was introduced to this fine project by some members of Wp.de and I want to help out.
Most of the English is fine, but the odd expressions sticks out. I don't want to change anything without discussing it first:
Eg. "On this page, a user account is valid" might sound better as "On this page, a user account is validated"
"All participants can make their own decision whether to show or hide their names or personal data..."
as "All participants can make their own choice whether or not .....
That is just a few ideas, please let me know your thoughts.
